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Wednesday, 13 August 2014

Bobs bear




Walt.Show not tell to describe and expand on one feature of our character.


Bob had no hair he was extremely bald.  He only had a big beard that he never ever brush even if you begged he wouldn't brush it because every time he tried the brush would get stuck and he already had ten brushes in it.He even had last nights food in it.He didn't think it even matter if he didn't brush it.

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Janita from Mrs Morgan-French. I laughed when I read that Bob had 10 brushes stuck in his head. Miharo.

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  2. Janita I like the way you said Bob had ten brushes in his beard because it made me laugh. I think that is really inspiring you should post more funny things on you're blog.

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  3. Hi Janita! I like the way that you had some really funny things in there. Like how there were 10 brushes in his beard and that he was bald! That is some awesome work!

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