Friday, 8 August 2014

My scary show don,t tell

WALT show not tell in our writing

In the misty forest she saw old trees  She could hear people laughing ha ha ha. Then she saw a blood trail that leaded to a cave. She saw a blood river then she looked around and saw dead bodies hanging in the trees she was wondering if she was next, she felt something on her neck suddenly ….  

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