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Friday, 16 October 2015

The Wasp Hive

On Friday it was a nice sunny lunchtime. But suddenly Ah!! there was a huge hive.

 The kids all sprinted quickly to class.    Eventually Miss Nicola shut the classroom door as the kids 

     can swarming  in screaming. Then we were happily  in class.  Sitting down reading a book.







2 comments:

  1. Great use of adverbs. Your story is very exciting. Reread and see what you missed with punctuation so you can edit next time before you publish.

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  2. Great use of adverbs. Your story is very exciting. Reread and see what you missed with punctuation so you can edit next time before you publish.

    ReplyDelete